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16-03-2015, 02:03 PM
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A poem I made up.

Thought it appropriate for this time of year.


A poem I made up a while ago.

I was at a loss for words as my anger just got worse
When he walked out of the house that cold March day.

Bet the neighbours heard me shout. "Where you going?" I called out.
"Hey you haven't even put your clothes away."

"Ugh teenagers." I said, as I stripped and made his bed.
I remember when he gave me so much joy.

Oh it really makes me sad, since he's grown in to a lad,
and turned into a spoilt and selfish boy.

"Oh you've come home." I replied. "Dinners in the bin." I lied.
"Mum." my son said "There is something you should know".

My heart beat twice as fast. Was he leaving me at last.
I really didn't want the tears to flow.

"Mum I searched the shop for hours. Then I found these lovely flowers."
He smiled and said. "I've used up all my pay."

But just to let you know. I really love you so
I hope you have a Happy Mothers Day.
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16-03-2015, 02:14 PM
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Re: A poem I made up.

What a lovely poem Maursey, that's just how it was when my son called in with some flowers for me on Saturday..
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16-03-2015, 02:20 PM
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Truly worthy of "The People's Friend".
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16-03-2015, 02:20 PM
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Re: A poem I made up.

Originally Posted by maursey ->
Thought it appropriate for this time of year.


A poem I made up a while ago.

I was at a loss for words as my anger just got worse
When he walked out of the house that cold March day.

Bet the neighbours heard me shout. "Where you going?" I called out.
"Hey you haven't even put your clothes away."

"Ugh teenagers." I said, as I stripped and made his bed.
I remember when he gave me so much joy.

Oh it really makes me sad, since he's grown in to a lad,
and turned into a spoilt and selfish boy.

"Oh you've come home." I replied. "Dinners in the bin." I lied.
"Mum." my son said "There is something you should know".

My heart beat twice as fast. Was he leaving me at last.
I really didn't want the tears to flow.

"Mum I searched the shop for hours. Then I found these lovely flowers."
He smiled and said. "I've used up all my pay."

But just to let you know. I really love you so
I hope you have a Happy Mothers Day.
God ! That's a little belter Maursey - truly love it
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16-03-2015, 03:35 PM
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Re: A poem I made up.

Thank you all so much for your kind words.
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16-03-2015, 03:40 PM
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Re: A poem I made up.

Lovely poem Maursey
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16-03-2015, 04:31 PM
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Re: A poem I made up.

Lovely Poem Maursey, I enjoyed it.
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16-03-2015, 06:32 PM
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Re: A poem I made up.

How lovely !
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16-03-2015, 08:26 PM
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Re: A poem I made up.

So pleased you all liked it.
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17-03-2015, 09:28 AM
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Great stuff chum.
 
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